Life Should Not Be Lived Behind a Computer Screen



Life should be played by accordions, covered in snow, filled with hot toddies, and laughed at by family. Life should be step-danced and free-form clogged. Dean Crouch and Ivan Hajek (above) should fill the world. Ramon Ayala should play and sing my accordion dreams. I have a lot of those–accordion dreams. Life should be spoken in Spanish, in poetry, in flowery prose. Flowery prose should never be condemned.

But I know my rules. Flowery prose is not allowed. Passive voice is not allowed, and yet there it is, disallowed by no one specifically and, therefore, passive.

I want to play my life in accordions, step-dance it, cover it in Spanish, and walk it out in the snow. I will speak it in poetry and never let go of flowery prose, because flowers are God’s own art, and I am in rapture.

I know my rules. I will never sit passively when there is something in this world to do (she ironically wrote as she sat behind her computer screen.)

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  1. Rowenna’s avatar

    Awesome post, Jill–flowers are God's art–love that line!

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  2. Jill’s avatar

    Thanks Rowenna!

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  3. T. Anne’s avatar

    OMGosh I LOVE this post!!! I'm going to remember this post in my dreams. You are a great writer!!!

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  4. Jill’s avatar

    Wow, thanks T. Anne! I haven't had a writing compliment in a long time. I think I'm gonna cry.

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  5. Terri Tiffany’s avatar

    You make me want to shut down my computer and dance:)

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  6. Jill’s avatar

    Terri, you should dance! It's fun.

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